I think that the main problem in Earth´s contamination could be AIR POLLUTION.
Every day, the average person inhales about 20,000 liters of air. Every time we breathe, we risk inhaling dangerous chemicals that have found their way into the air.
Air pollution includes all contaminants found in the atmosphere. These dangerous substances can be either in the form of gases or particles.
Air pollution can be found both outdoors and indoors. Pollutants can be trapped inside buildings, causing indoor pollution that lasts for a long time.
Air pollution is really a big problem. It kills animals, it affects out ozone layer and if the ozone layer get distroyed... humans are gone forever. Our world was created very nice, and without contamination.. and we.. as humans created this horrible situation of contaminating our own world.
This world is not for anybody, is ours as a community we are being so jelous because we are distroying our only world, and we don´t think about our future.. our kids have the same right to have a world! but a better one if its possible.
Air pollution is getting our ozone layer destroyed... glaciars are getting melted and polar bears dying. Not only polar bears, a lot of animals are dying because of our fault and our lack of responsability. We as commnunities we should help get a better world, a perfect environment full of peace and nature, but real nature, with fresh air & water we can breathe.
What really we are supposed to be doing right now.. is getting our family and friends to form a campain in helping our environment get useless and functionable for us.. to use resources. If nature gave us resources, water, air to breathe and stuff, we should help it back....
Marifer I really liked your choice of air pollution. But, I think that you copied and pasted a lot of things from internet. Next time put it in your own words. Eveything is copied and pasted, you have to do your own homework, I can really guess that you did not do that. You should right more, and try to make it interesting with your own words. I totally agree of everything you said in this homework. Good work Marifer!
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ReplyDeleteMarifer i enjoy reading your paragrpahs, annd i enjoy more, reading your opinion about air pollution. I like that you are aware of this problem, and hopefully you are not helping to cause more air pollution. I liek how you researched and how you do know about this environmental issue. I think all environmental issues are a big deal, and im glad your bigest concern is about our air to breath. I liked that you mentioned what we are doing to cause this issue, and what we can do to get rid of it.
Save the wolrd marifer(:
I like your essay :) hehehe. I'm glad to know that you are aware of this huge problem that is affecting our life. Although I think water pollution is much important, air pollution also affect a lot our world. If you think about it, the air we breath in our is completely contaminate so if you can imagine how many pollutants go into our body system D= hehehe well, love it :D
ReplyDeleteI really agree with you ideas about air pollution. It is a big problem that need to be dealt with NOW! It is a horrible thought to think that our air we need to survive and breathe off of every day is contaminated. There will come a time when we will have no more breathable air, and then we will realize the damage we have caused. Although, I do agree with Adriana, it does seem like some big words, you should read that over. But well done anyway.
ReplyDeleteMarifer, I totally agree with you, the air is really important for are environment. In order to be healthy and have our earth healthy we need healthy are to breath from. This is a very well written essay.
ReplyDeleteYou are totally correct Marifer, Air Pollution should be a concern of every body. It is true, when we inhale oxygen (air) we expose ourselves to inhale dangerous chemicals and other bad stuff for our body, for example when you go to Mexico City, you can fill it in your body. Even though our body is of great importance; however the other things that Air pollution is cause of any other things. For example it destroys the Ozone and kills animals and other things with great importance.
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Marifer, the essay is good, too good. I am not that sure you did it all by yourself because I compared this essay with others you have done in the past and the change is just great! It may be possible that you got help, and that is just awesome. You repeat the same ozone idea plenty of times, but I also agree with those ideas. The air is full of chemicals that damage us. Good job.
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